This week I have been using a range of language features to help make my writing more descriptive. Some language features we have been talking about are similes, metaphors, personification and onomatopoeia.
This is one of my favourite sentences from my writing this week it was
I was berthing so fast like a cheater chasing his pray
If you want to read more click down were it says click here for a link. Also i am not that finished so yea it a work in progress
